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Scars Pg 1-2 by SilentJ75 Scars Pg 1-2 by SilentJ75
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That is the lamest, most unoriginal title ever... OTL If I think of anything better, I'll change it but for now it is what it is.

I've discovered that I'm terrible at word bubble placement. And I'm even worse at sound effects, which is pretty sad considering how important both of those things are in comics... :'D I fail so hard.

Anyway, let me explain this a little so you know what's going on. If you remember that last picture I drew of Jira and Fang, you know that Jira's been at some special hot springs up in the mountains to heal her hands. Once her hands were healed enough she started training(on the same mountain) so she'd be able to fight again.
This comic starts off with her finishing her training and heading back home to Sky Village. I'm sure you guys can guess what's going to happen on her way home. But that's what this is going to be. I'm going to try and make it no more than ten pages because if it's any longer I'll never finish it. :/

I did a lot of experimenting with these first two pages because I wasn't sure how I wanted it to look. I also wanted to figure out a quick but nice way I could do them that won't take me forever and a day.
I'm pretty happy with the result, but I think I'll make the rest of the pages even simpler so they get done faster. We'll see how it goes. This little comic will be a fun way for me to practice my comic skills and work on more action-y poses and perspectives and such.

I would greatly appreciate feedback on these. I'd really like to know what you guys think so I know what I need to work on.

Jira and Fang's overly detailed outfits will be the death of me. But drawing those two together was SO MUCH FUN. *gets stabbed by Jira*


Jira's app:
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Characters, story and art (c) Me :iconsilentj75:


Commissions are open! [link]
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:iconkazgarokproductions:
KazgarokProductions Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011   Traditional Artist
All my love all my love
This is soo incredible. The action, the posing, the shading and those COLORS! Simply magnificent to say the least.
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks~! ;u; The poses were difficult and they're only going to get harder as this comic progresses so I'm glad I'm doing okay on them so far. :'D
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KazgarokProductions Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011   Traditional Artist
You're doing wonderful^^
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Azure-Grimalkin Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Great job on this
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks~! ^u^
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Asacream Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student
Are her hands okay? ;v; They look red...
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, she's been punching a rock repeatedly so yeah... She's gonna bleed at least a little. ^ ^;
She's fine. She's just showing off like a badass. :D
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BurningArtist Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^u^
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BurningArtist Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh sweety, I need your opinion: [link]
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HotBlackAngel Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Artist
:icongrabbyhands: @ fang

awesome work ouo
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:iconsilentj75:
SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol XD
Thanks~! ^u^
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HotBlackAngel Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2011  Student Artist
|D no probbbbb
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Firefly-Raye Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
FFFFFF LOVE THIS~! *O*
This is just wonderful! I love how you've done the coloring on this, and I think it's very aesthetically pleasing to look at. * u * ffff Fang is too cute
I'm going to definitely be following this SO YOU'D BETTER STICK WITH IT AND FINISH IT.

Kumiko: Jira looks so scary punching that rock ; A ;
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks~! I'm so glad you like it! ;u; I love Fang<3
I'll try my best! >< It's not going to be too long so I should be able to finish it fairly quickly. And I'm not RPing with Jira until I finish it so more incentive for me to get it done!

Fang: Really? I think she looks pretty sexy~ *u*
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Firefly-Raye Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
YUSH. GET IT DONE. XD *waits with anticipation*

Kumiko: Sexy...? o ^ o ???? *concept is lost to her*
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I WILL! XD *starts working on the next two pages*

Fang: ouo You're adorable. I'm gonna take you home with me~
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Firefly-Raye Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
O_O *stares at you until you're finished*

Kumiko: o ^ o And you're a creeper. So I'm running away now. *runs away*
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ono *awkwardly works on them*

Fang: Huh? Wait! Come back! *chases after her* I WANT TO KEEP YOU FOREVER!!!
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Firefly-Raye Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
oh btw I'm finally working on our double meme again, hopefully I can get a lot done on it tonight =.=;;;;

Kumiko: *"runs" faster* Nuuuu! >.<;; You're even creepier than Jira's other friend!! Jira needs to stop having creeper-friends!
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I had forgotten about that, lol. Take your time. I need to go back and fix mine up a little (since I finished it a while ago it looks ugly to me now...)

Fang: Oh no, Nodoka's much creepier. She eats souls. *runs faster and tackles her* I got you~:heart:
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Broken-chan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
It looks really nice~ I'm looking forward to the next pages. c=
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay! Thanks~! >u< I'll try not to take forever to get them done. :'D
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Broken-chan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Don't worry, if you take less time than I do to get pages done, that's fiiine~ Note that I take forever to get pages done. For anything. At all. xD
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, these ones are a bit sketchy so they don't take as long. And now that I know how I want these pages to look they should come out fairly quickly. But normally I take forever, mostly because I procrastinate. XD
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Broken-chan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I see xD Well... Good luck resisting the urge to procrastinate then! xD I know that urge all too well...
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol Thanks! XD I'll do my best not to procrastinate! ><
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Broken-chan Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
You can do it, I have faith in you! xD
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Commy-Lover Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
can i assume the "friend" is kiku?
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup. Jira's still pretty pissed off about that so she's really eager to kick his ass.
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Commy-Lover Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very nice~ I'm kinda happy I coudl be included in this....even though kiku is stupid enough to think she can stop someone liek that
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, I thought Kiku was very brave to stand up for her friend like that. Jira's very happy to know she has such awesome friends. :3
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Commy-Lover Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.....but in all serious Kiku was being an idiot thinking she could stop him lol. I kinda would like them to haev a rematch more like him chase kiku around
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah... She probably should have run away sooner. I don't think Jira would allow that. If Yuuto were to run into Kiku again he would most definitely kill her. :C
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Commy-Lover Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah.....but then Jira can be all badass and kill is ass /o/
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm... I'll keep that in mind. Once I finish this little comic I'll start RPing with Jira again so we could definitely get an epic RP like that to happen.
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TonksRules Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011
So what pokemon is Fang? And make sure to keep going with this comic! It looks fantastic! XD
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fang is a Haxorus, one of the newer Pokemon. All her info can be found here: [link] :3
And thanks~! >u< I'm glad you think it looks okay! ;u;
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TonksRules Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
Okay? It looks amazing! XD XD And Thank you very much. XD I haven't been keeping up with the last two generations of pokemon so I wasn't sure. ^_^U
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol I can totally understand that. With over 600 Pokemon now I'm not surprised people lost interest. But I'm a nerd and will probably love it forever~ XD Some of the newer pokemon are kinda lame but there are also some really awesome ones, like Haxorus. :3
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TonksRules Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
I'm still a pokemon nerd...but I just can't stand most of the new ones! And I stopped watching the show ever since Misty left. :( And I liked the 3rd generation of pokemon because I have a game with them in it and I love them. But I do like a few new pokemon...like joltik...or however it's spelled...and it's evolutions...I adore it. <3
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SilentJ75 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I stopped watching the show YEARS ago. XD Looking back, the show just wasn't very good. Have you ever read the Pokemon Adventures manga? The manga is actually really good. The story and characters are simply amazing~!
But yeah, I think the 2nd gen is my favorite. But honestly, with all the different gens there are going to be awesome Pokemon and really lame Pokemon.
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TonksRules Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
There are a lot of plot holes and stupid things in the show....and I read some sort of comic for pokemon that was fantastic...I need to find it again. And yeah...but as each new generation comes there seem to be more and more bad pokemon. DX
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